Valkyrie's new Profile (finished)

[Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose]

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(Valkyrie)

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Name Valkyrie
Age 17
Birth 15th of December
Class Iron Maiden
Height 6,0
Weight 10st
Hair Dark Green
Eye's Navy Blue
Weapon Dark Rose Bow lv 73
Arcadia (L) lv10
Thunder Orb lv 45
Warrior Shoes lv 30

Special
Poison Blast lv 15
Raiden Missle lv 35
Delta split lv 30
Zielregen lv 30
Doppleganger lv 45
Omega Comet lv 38
Giga Ice lv 28
Terra Ice lv 28
Giga Star lv 28
Giga Heal lv 30
Sheild lv 30
Crimson Flame lv 26
Soaring Fire lv 26
Vulcan Blaze lv 28
Rose of Zeal lv 27
Iron Defense lv 27

WM-Bow 93

Student's

Like's Chocolate,Tomatoes,Fighting,Horror,Justice,Keeping promises,Rice Ball's,Bow,Gun,

Valkyrie is Adell's younger Twin Sister, like her brother Adell she is strong willed and very determined. but sadly Valkyrie was born blind but able to read minds and heal poeple. but some poeple called her a witch and since then Valkyrie never had any friends except her two brother's Adell and Spike (Warlord) in Battle like the archer she uses the wind and the earth to tell her where the enemy's are.she shocked Roxas after showing him just what she can do. fighting (still thinking it out)


Valkyrie's Students

Lady Monique(Space Knight) lv 900/Infernal Staff(l)
Lace Rose (Archer) lv 900/Drake Hunter
Kairi(Lady Fighter) lv 1200/God Hands
Caramel(Master Theif) lv 900/Star Shatter
Maple(Master Theif) lv 900/Medgiddo Cannon
Sophie(Beast Savoir) lv 900/Beam Axe
Meidi(Galaxy Mage) lv 900/Infernal Staff
Medi(Prism Mage) lv 900/Infernal Staff
Mist(Saint) lv 900/Evil Hunter

[Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose]

Please replies to it I worked hard on I thank you................

[boogieknight]

Are you modeling the abilities on an actual generic character, or is she completely made up?

Female story characters with white mage attributes, even when their real skill is in offense, is a little overdone. Now if the character had every type of the lower level elemental magics at high levels, that would be interesting. It'd be a nice blend of muscle and magic for a true long range fighter. On a final note, it's been traditional for buffs and debuffs to work on a proportional basis rather than in absolute numbers.

[Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose]

I made her up and the move's are made especially her and she is adell's sister so do I need to redo her again?? coz she and adell are in my family and not hanako and taro.....sorry

[doomsdaylee]

Another gripe I'd have is simply the mary-sueness of her being Adells sister, other than that:

Why would Roxas suddenly change his mind about her and kiss her like that?
And
Why is she dubbed a witch (as in a bad way) in a world where magic is common-place?

[Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose]

sorry I'll redo it... once I remember what I'm gonna put down...the part she was a witch was amistake sorry gotta redo it