Reisen Udongein Inaba
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In the back of my heart, there is a door, whom someone is knocking ever so lightly...[Mo0:0]
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Post by Reisen Udongein Inaba on Apr 3, 2009 13:53:23 GMT -5
I sat on my bed, feeling my chin where I fell. A sharp pain was all I felt. "Oww...it hurts so much.." I painfully groaned. "Then stop touching it. Of course it'll just hurt more. Common sense." Epphy said as he shrugged. I puffed out my cheeks and stuck my tongue out at him. "Blehhh~" I then laid down on my bed and pulled the blanket over me. "You're going to sleep already?" He slowly asked me. I faked sleeping, to listen to what he was going to say afterwards. "Wow, that was fast." He scratched his head. He came over to me, and sat down on the bed. "Ah...well. The beauty needs her beauty sleep, most certainly." Epphy teased. He then looked like he had a thought and said, "If she's really asleep, then I guess I can..." He said slowly and quietly. He brought his face close to mine, and quickly kissed my lips. I blushed, even with my eyes closed. "She blushes..! What kind of dream is she having?" Epphy smiled. I didn't dare open my eyes, and only kept it to myself and fell asleep.
(That was only a part of my story. If I were to put all of the story here, it'd go beyond 60000 characters. And just this small paragraph took out 1265 characters. These twins are just...so romantic aren't they? ^ ^ ♥)
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Post by ~Flonnedre Scarlet~ on Apr 3, 2009 19:37:57 GMT -5
So romantic! ^ ^ ♥ How about you give us a few more parts of your story next time, because it sounds very very interesting..  More than 60,000 characters? My, that's a long story indeed. It deserves recognition..  |
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Post by Reisen Udongein Inaba on Apr 3, 2009 20:28:18 GMT -5
Well..over 200 pages long, over 2000 words per page..More..? There's only 5 parts, if you don't include the prequel. -I guess?-
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Post by ~Flonnedre Scarlet~ on Apr 3, 2009 21:11:20 GMT -5
The more the content, much better! |
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Reisen Udongein Inaba
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Post by Reisen Udongein Inaba on Apr 3, 2009 22:31:22 GMT -5
I don't want it to be endless though..:3''
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Post by ~Flonnedre Scarlet~ on Apr 3, 2009 22:40:13 GMT -5
Well it is hard to write an endless story after all. ^ ^; But you have complete control over your story and when it will end. |
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Post by Reisen Udongein Inaba on Apr 3, 2009 22:44:23 GMT -5
I guess so, thank you for your encouragement.
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Post by MajinKirby on Apr 5, 2009 9:41:25 GMT -5
I normally don't go for this sort of romantic stories, but I daresay that yours was actually pretty cute. It made me giggle like a school girl, which is something I hope I don't do for a long time. o.o
But yes, nice job. Keep putting more up, and I promise that I'll read every word of it.
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