Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose
Kagatsuchi
Goddess Of Overlord's just leave me I travel Alone....[Mo0:13]
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Post by Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose on May 10, 2009 9:43:58 GMT -5
img196.imageshack.us/img196/4049/femalefighter.png(Valkyrie) fc09.deviantart.com/fs15/f/2007/100/3/7/041007__rose_of_zeal_by_crybringer.jpg(Valkyrie wear's Kasumi's dress) Name Valkyrie Age 17 Birth 15th of December Class Iron Maiden Height 6,0 Weight 10st Hair Dark Green Eye's Navy Blue Weapon Dark Rose Bow lv 73 Arcadia (L) lv10 Thunder Orb lv 45 Warrior Shoes lv 30
Special Poison Blast lv 15 Raiden Missle lv 35 Delta split lv 30 Zielregen lv 30 Doppleganger lv 45 Omega Comet lv 38 Giga Ice lv 28 Terra Ice lv 28 Giga Star lv 28 Giga Heal lv 30 Sheild lv 30 Crimson Flame lv 26 Soaring Fire lv 26 Vulcan Blaze lv 28 Rose of Zeal lv 27 Iron Defense lv 27
WM-Bow 93
Student's
Like's Chocolate,Tomatoes,Fighting,Horror,Justice,Keeping promises,Rice Ball's,Bow,Gun,
Valkyrie is Adell's younger Twin Sister, like her brother Adell she is strong willed and very determined. but sadly Valkyrie was born blind but able to read minds and heal poeple. but some poeple called her a witch and since then Valkyrie never had any friends except her two brother's Adell and Spike (Warlord) in Battle like the archer she uses the wind and the earth to tell her where the enemy's are.she shocked Roxas after showing him just what she can do. fighting (still thinking it out)
Valkyrie's Students
Lady Monique(Space Knight) lv 900/Infernal Staff(l) Lace Rose (Archer) lv 900/Drake Hunter Kairi(Lady Fighter) lv 1200/God Hands Caramel(Master Theif) lv 900/Star Shatter Maple(Master Theif) lv 900/Medgiddo Cannon Sophie(Beast Savoir) lv 900/Beam Axe Meidi(Galaxy Mage) lv 900/Infernal Staff Medi(Prism Mage) lv 900/Infernal Staff Mist(Saint) lv 900/Evil Hunter
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Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose
Kagatsuchi
Goddess Of Overlord's just leave me I travel Alone....[Mo0:13]
Posts: 288
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Post by Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose on May 16, 2009 10:11:09 GMT -5
Please replies to it I worked hard on I thank you................
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Post by boogieknight on May 17, 2009 16:43:30 GMT -5
Are you modeling the abilities on an actual generic character, or is she completely made up?
Female story characters with white mage attributes, even when their real skill is in offense, is a little overdone. Now if the character had every type of the lower level elemental magics at high levels, that would be interesting. It'd be a nice blend of muscle and magic for a true long range fighter. On a final note, it's been traditional for buffs and debuffs to work on a proportional basis rather than in absolute numbers.
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Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose
Kagatsuchi
Goddess Of Overlord's just leave me I travel Alone....[Mo0:13]
Posts: 288
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Post by Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose on May 18, 2009 6:07:47 GMT -5
I made her up and the move's are made especially her and she is adell's sister so do I need to redo her again?? coz she and adell are in my family and not hanako and taro.....sorry
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doomsdaylee
Kagatsuchi
[M:-8500]
Midna's Vassal. (And Prince Consort <3)[Mo0:0]
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Post by doomsdaylee on May 21, 2009 11:53:42 GMT -5
Another gripe I'd have is simply the mary-sueness of her being Adells sister, other than that:
Why would Roxas suddenly change his mind about her and kiss her like that? And Why is she dubbed a witch (as in a bad way) in a world where magic is common-place?
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Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose
Kagatsuchi
Goddess Of Overlord's just leave me I travel Alone....[Mo0:13]
Posts: 288
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Post by Freyadre_Scarlet_Rose on May 21, 2009 12:24:47 GMT -5
sorry I'll redo it... once I remember what I'm gonna put down...the part she was a witch was amistake sorry gotta redo it
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