qultada
Shinobi
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"I'd laugh on the steps of the guillotine, thats the way of the corsair!"[Mo0:0]
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Post by qultada on Dec 5, 2007 23:45:43 GMT -5
(Disgaea 1) Name: Qultada Age: 1532 Gender: Male Race: Humanoid Rank: F Class/Monster: Scout Realm: Sea of Gehenna Weapon Skills/Abilites/Magic: None of yet Appearance: Personality: Qultada is quiet and very little is known about him. He keeps to himself and dispises being in a group of loud, obnoxious people. Setting himself aside from most, Qultada swears allegiance to no one and goes wherever he feels like it. A big fan of bounty hunting, Qultada collects a good sum of what he sets out to do. Biography: Qultada was raised in Jotunheim by a group of rogue prinnys, one of which taught him all he knows about guns. He set away from Jotunheim to the Overlord's castle where he was declined after asking to become a vassal and work under the overlord. Angry that he was declined, Qultada went to the Stellar Graveyard where he decided to kill some time by working under an old man who me had met there. Once the old man had died, Qultada had aquired enough Hel from him to be able to afford a trip to the Sea of Gehenna which is where he now resides. Interests: Pizza, guns, cats. Vassals: None Other:None Reminisce Shoppe Items: (Couldn't figure out how to aquire HL or how much you start with)
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chibizmut
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Post by chibizmut on Dec 10, 2007 12:58:11 GMT -5
I don't see anything wrong, per say, but your missing the Rp sample. You'll need to provide one before this can be approved.
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qultada
Shinobi
[M:-3500]
"I'd laugh on the steps of the guillotine, thats the way of the corsair!"[Mo0:0]
Posts: 96
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Post by qultada on Dec 10, 2007 19:50:23 GMT -5
The Sea of Gehenna, a hot place that just got a little warmer. Qultada looked around the room in the two story Inn he decided to stay at to find all his belongings he had left there were missing. Cursing under his breath, Qultada ran to the window and stared out through the heat to see two demons fleeing carrying a suitcase between them. Opening the window, Qultada jumped out into the night landing softly on the ground. Hearing the light thump of the gunslinger, one of the demons turned to look what made the noise and shreeked when it saw that it was the owner of the belongings they had just ganked. As Qultada moved out of the light, he seemed to disappear into the night. As he got closer he grinned slightly as the two demons who he had seen were in a full out run now, they seemed to be two Hobbits pulling out his revolver he shot one in the ankle causing it to scream out in pain. Dashing forward, Qultada slid right in front of them and shot the one who was still holding onto the handle of his suitcase, causeing it to fall to the ground, dead. Turning to the second one, he muttered quietly, but just loud enough so it could hear what he was saying. "I suggest you leave now before you end up like your friend..." Squealing in pain and freight, the Hobbit got up and fell backwards, causing his ankle to shatter under his own weight. Picking up his suitcase, Qultada placed his revolver into a holster on his side and walked out into the night...
(OOC: Hope that works ^_^ Forgot to put a sample on, sorry =X)
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WAR
Maou
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Post by WAR on Dec 10, 2007 20:00:58 GMT -5
I dunno... he seems a bit strong for his ranking. :x Remember, if E is total nobodies, the F isn't too far from that. What do you think, Zmut?
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qultada
Shinobi
[M:-3500]
"I'd laugh on the steps of the guillotine, thats the way of the corsair!"[Mo0:0]
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Post by qultada on Dec 10, 2007 20:03:11 GMT -5
You know that Hobbits are like... The weakest of the Faerie race o.o;
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Ryuzaki
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No Life King[M:-197492]
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Post by Ryuzaki on Dec 10, 2007 20:16:14 GMT -5
This character is fine
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chibizmut
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Post by chibizmut on Dec 10, 2007 20:29:24 GMT -5
and thus, Ryu has spoken. This character is Approved.
....Unless anyone else has anything they'd like to add? No one? Good, thought so.
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